The Cursed Sanctuary You gathered me into your arms held me close to your heart whispering in my ears that you will take care of me forever all the while you were slowly inching towards the edge When I opened my eyes I was between you and the empty space off the edge you gave me a cold smile but love shined in your eyes becoming an obsession and you whispered in your soothing voice “No one can reach you my love this will be the only sanctuary for you now” Your arms around me, warmed me Yet, they squeezed me breathless Your voice soothed me Yet, the heaviness of it scared me Your eyes assured me of love Yet, the intensity of them made me want to run But here I am still trapped and prisoned by my own sanctuary Between an empty space and your love © Vindhya Colombage 2017 Photo credit: http://blondepassion.deviantart.com AdvertisementShare this:TwitterFacebookLinkedInLike this:Like Loading... Related 27 thoughts on “The Cursed Sanctuary” Add yours yikes! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply 🙂 You dont like it? LikeLiked by 1 person Reply No, quite the opposite. I loved it. I just had an emotional reaction. That’s how good it is… sorry I didn’t clarify that. mea culpa. ❤︎ LikeLiked by 1 person Thank you 😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Yes, it is a sanctuary, but it is a cage – a beautiful, gilded cage perhaps, but still a cage. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply I love it! 🙂 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you 😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Loved reading the poem ! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Quite well balanced I would say, Love and Hate collide, becomes a dilemma. You can’t move forward or backward. Dangerous path to lead! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Yes. And most don’t have the courage to say ‘no’ and walk away from toxic relationships. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply It’s not.easy to say no, your mind says yes leave it, but your heart say no. Than the fears and doubts and lack of self confidence and counceling plays a big part as well LikeLiked by 1 person That was so intense💙 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply So powerful and what a dangerous and original metaphor. Great poem. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Beautiful!! Love the imagery and subtle anguish, trying to break free. 😊👌👌 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you 😃 LikeLike Reply What a creativity! What beautiful string of thoughts! What an amazing frame. Simply great! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you 😊 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Deep insight 👌👌 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you LikeLiked by 1 person Reply So many of us find we are in cages of many kinds. I loved your poem! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you 😃 LikeLike Reply This is a good poem but I hope neither you nor anyone you know is in that situation. It would signify control rather than true love. A true lover does not seek to control, to dominate. Thank you for stopping by my blog and following. 🙂 — Suzanne LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you. No its not a personal experience…but I have seen it happen more than once 😊 LikeLike Reply Nice work LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Thank you LikeLike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ
No, quite the opposite. I loved it. I just had an emotional reaction. That’s how good it is… sorry I didn’t clarify that. mea culpa. ❤︎ LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes, it is a sanctuary, but it is a cage – a beautiful, gilded cage perhaps, but still a cage. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Quite well balanced I would say, Love and Hate collide, becomes a dilemma. You can’t move forward or backward. Dangerous path to lead! LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Yes. And most don’t have the courage to say ‘no’ and walk away from toxic relationships. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
It’s not.easy to say no, your mind says yes leave it, but your heart say no. Than the fears and doubts and lack of self confidence and counceling plays a big part as well LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful!! Love the imagery and subtle anguish, trying to break free. 😊👌👌 LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
What a creativity! What beautiful string of thoughts! What an amazing frame. Simply great! LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
This is a good poem but I hope neither you nor anyone you know is in that situation. It would signify control rather than true love. A true lover does not seek to control, to dominate. Thank you for stopping by my blog and following. 🙂 — Suzanne LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Thank you. No its not a personal experience…but I have seen it happen more than once 😊 LikeLike Reply
yikes!
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🙂 You dont like it?
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No, quite the opposite. I loved it. I just had an emotional reaction. That’s how good it is… sorry I didn’t clarify that. mea culpa. ❤︎
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Thank you 😊
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Yes, it is a sanctuary, but it is a cage – a beautiful, gilded cage perhaps, but still a cage.
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I love it! 🙂
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Thank you 😊
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Loved reading the poem !
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Quite well balanced I would say, Love and Hate collide, becomes a dilemma. You can’t move forward or backward.
Dangerous path to lead!
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Yes. And most don’t have the courage to say ‘no’ and walk away from toxic relationships.
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It’s not.easy to say no, your mind says yes leave it, but your heart say no.
Than the fears and doubts and lack of self confidence and counceling plays a big part as well
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That was so intense💙
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So powerful and what a dangerous and original metaphor. Great poem.
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Thank you
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Beautiful!! Love the imagery and subtle anguish, trying to break free. 😊👌👌
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What a creativity! What beautiful string of thoughts! What an amazing frame. Simply great!
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Thank you 😊
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Deep insight 👌👌
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So many of us find we are in cages of many kinds. I loved your poem!
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This is a good poem but I hope neither you nor anyone you know is in that situation. It would signify control rather than true love. A true lover does not seek to control, to dominate. Thank you for stopping by my blog and following. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you. No its not a personal experience…but I have seen it happen more than once 😊
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Nice work
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