The Phoenix Words, disguised as promises led me to sky I was soaring up Believing I had the protection of your wings Words, in their true form brought me tumbling down I went past the earth beyond where I was below to a burning dark place Accusing glances burnt me Whispers behind my back scorched and seared me fingers pointed more fire at me I was trapped and burning I was trapped and burning for I gave up fighting for me for the strongest enemy was not out there but within me acrimonious and contemptuous degrading and dragging me to the bottom Then I met her Strongest and most faithful She was not out there I found her from within compassionate and reassuring dignifying She fought for me valiantly to regain all lost things I stopped feeling the fire and I felt free I found her so she can find me and we stand here rising from the ashes more majestic and resilient like the magnificent phoenix Β© Vindhya Colombage AdvertisementShare this:TwitterFacebookLinkedInLike this:Like Loading... Related 16 thoughts on “The Phoenix” Add yours Excellent composition! LikeLiked by 4 people Reply Thank you LikeLike Reply Really beautiful! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Wow!!!! Wow is the wordπ LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you ππ LikeLike Reply Lovely poem, and beautiful artwork! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you π. I found the artwork online. But the name of the original artist was not there. But whoever it is I think its wonderful and all the credit should go to him or her. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Excellent! LikeLiked by 3 people Reply Thank you Divya π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Excellent I like this LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you very much π LikeLike Reply You write with great feeling. It seeps through the words and settles within me. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply “for the strongest enemy was not out there but within me” I love itπ» LikeLiked by 2 people Reply Thank you π LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Great poem π You may like to contribute to my new daily prompt community: https://aaamazingphoenix.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/new-community-for-sharing-daily-prompt-posts/ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (required) (Address never made public) Name (required) Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email. Δ
Thank you π. I found the artwork online. But the name of the original artist was not there. But whoever it is I think its wonderful and all the credit should go to him or her. LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
You write with great feeling. It seeps through the words and settles within me. LikeLiked by 2 people Reply
Great poem π You may like to contribute to my new daily prompt community: https://aaamazingphoenix.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/new-community-for-sharing-daily-prompt-posts/ LikeLiked by 1 person Reply
Excellent composition!
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Really beautiful!
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Thank you π
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Wow!!!! Wow is the wordπ
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Thank you ππ
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Lovely poem, and beautiful artwork!
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Thank you π. I found the artwork online. But the name of the original artist was not there. But whoever it is I think its wonderful and all the credit should go to him or her.
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Excellent!
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Thank you Divya π
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Excellent I like this
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Thank you very much π
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You write with great feeling. It seeps through the words and settles within me.
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“for the strongest enemy
was not out there
but within me”
I love itπ»
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Thank you π
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Great poem π You may like to contribute to my new daily prompt community:
https://aaamazingphoenix.wordpress.com/2018/07/20/new-community-for-sharing-daily-prompt-posts/
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